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	<title>Comments on: DSHnD: Chapter Twenty-Eight</title>
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		<title>By: auronlu</title>
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		<dc:creator>auronlu</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 24 Mar 2010 04:41:03 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Tidus&#039; story has to be a little rushed, but when you two squeezed him in, he&#039;s always himself. I wish I could write him so easily. Good kid. I wonder what you&#039;ll be doing to wrap up his thread.

Hm. That&#039;s the first time I remember your devoting a scene to the ordinary soldiers in the story. It&#039;s good to get them in -- and I like that Spartan warrior pair -- but it seems slightly out of place to have that POV change so late.

It is a bally good thing Nooj has Aqualev and his discretion to rely on. Hate to have to ask Yuna to patch them up. Of course, she might not guess the cause of those wounds.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Tidus&#8217; story has to be a little rushed, but when you two squeezed him in, he&#8217;s always himself. I wish I could write him so easily. Good kid. I wonder what you&#8217;ll be doing to wrap up his thread.</p>
<p>Hm. That&#8217;s the first time I remember your devoting a scene to the ordinary soldiers in the story. It&#8217;s good to get them in &#8212; and I like that Spartan warrior pair &#8212; but it seems slightly out of place to have that POV change so late.</p>
<p>It is a bally good thing Nooj has Aqualev and his discretion to rely on. Hate to have to ask Yuna to patch them up. Of course, she might not guess the cause of those wounds.</p>
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		<title>By: Writings of an Owlmoose :: Entries :: DSHnD: Chapter Twenty-Seven</title>
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		<dc:creator>Writings of an Owlmoose :: Entries :: DSHnD: Chapter Twenty-Seven</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 28 May 2008 06:55:55 +0000</pubDate>
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		<title>By: Writings of an Owlmoose :: Entries :: DSHnD: Chapter Twenty-Nine</title>
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		<pubDate>Tue, 27 May 2008 06:48:13 +0000</pubDate>
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