Comments on: DSHnD: Chapter Five http://www.owlmoose.com/fic/archive/2008/05/dshnd-chapter-five/ KJ's Fiction Archive Sat, 14 Jan 2012 22:14:31 +0000 http://wordpress.org/?v=2.9.2 hourly 1 By: auronlu http://www.owlmoose.com/fic/archive/2008/05/dshnd-chapter-five/comment-page-1/#comment-1929 auronlu Sat, 06 Mar 2010 05:05:53 +0000 http://www.owlmoose.com/fic/archive/?p=80#comment-1929 In contrast to the earlier, abbreviated interaction with the Crimson Squad trainees, Nooj's interactions with the Crusaders here is well-developed. I squeed at Lucil (although this is a slightly more vivacious/outgoing Lucil than I write, but there's so little canon characterization for her). I'm also glad to see Luzzu (surviving!) and Beclem getting a part in the secondary-characters-need-more-love department. Nooj's troop-rousing speechifying is charismatic enough to be believable. Baralai's nervousness and honesty are a touching contrast. Logos showing up with Kinoc was a delightful (probably first time that word's ever been used for him) bit of minor canon. He increases the slime level by a notch the moment he speaks! Yuna's brave determination to do the right thing as soon as she sees the truth about what Kinoc's doing is very satisfying, very in character, very foolhardy. The dramatic Nooj-to-the-rescue ending is great. In contrast to the earlier, abbreviated interaction with the Crimson Squad trainees, Nooj’s interactions with the Crusaders here is well-developed. I squeed at Lucil (although this is a slightly more vivacious/outgoing Lucil than I write, but there’s so little canon characterization for her). I’m also glad to see Luzzu (surviving!) and Beclem getting a part in the secondary-characters-need-more-love department.

Nooj’s troop-rousing speechifying is charismatic enough to be believable. Baralai’s nervousness and honesty are a touching contrast.

Logos showing up with Kinoc was a delightful (probably first time that word’s ever been used for him) bit of minor canon. He increases the slime level by a notch the moment he speaks!

Yuna’s brave determination to do the right thing as soon as she sees the truth about what Kinoc’s doing is very satisfying, very in character, very foolhardy. The dramatic Nooj-to-the-rescue ending is great.

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